This is our second music video draft including both performance and narrative shoots:

What went well:

• Lip syncing is good throughout,
• We have a variety of shots,
• The camera is steady as we used a tripod,
• The editing and effects are good,

What to improve:

• Add more effects and a variety of editing,
• Make it more interesting,
• Finish the song,
• Make cleaner cuts,

Below is our self-assessment of draft 2:

Our teacher also gave us some feedback:

• In the performance clips add a variety of filters and positioning,
• Add a close-up in the car clips,
• Different angles when shes lying in bed,
• Try a split screen,
• Complete song,