This is the feedback that was given to us by another student after watching draft 4:

Second set of peer feedback:

What went well:

• steady shots,
• choice of costumes,
• choice of locations,
• variety of shot distances,
• good acting,
• good star image conveyed,
• edit to the beat is well done,
• sold a good story,

what to work on:

• no moving shots,
• the blue flashing lights,
• no low angles,
• more movement,
• overused strobe lights,