BELOW IS OUR DRAFT 2:
What went well:
- The car setting and text effects work well to make the video more exciting and engaging.
- Our clips have quicker cuts and more differentiation/
- Pace of edit is to the beat of the song and perfectly in time.
- The colour of text and flashing clips is effective and match the eyeshadow/makeup on our model.
- The mise en scene and settings/loactions used to film in match up well to our genre.
We need to work on:
- We need to remove glitches and extra text boxes that make the video look messy.
- We need to improve our video quality when exporting it to ensure the audience get the best experience.
- Add in quicker cuts and more dissolve and film cut video transitions to add dimension.
- Use lighting/colour effects to match perfectly to makeup and link all clips and different stages of the video together.
Teacher’s feedback of what to improve:
- Move the model aropund the screen so that she isn’t always in the middle.
- Flip some of the shots hoprizontally.
- Use more video transitions to make cuts seamless.
- Add in close up shots in the car.
My Self Assesment Sheet:
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