BELOW IS OUR DRAFT 2:

What went well:

• The car setting and text effects work well to make the video more exciting and engaging.
• Our clips have quicker cuts and more differentiation/
• Pace of edit is to the beat of the song and perfectly in time.
• The colour of text and flashing clips is effective and match the eyeshadow/makeup on our model.
• The mise en scene and settings/loactions used to film in match up well to our genre.

We need to work on:

• We need to remove glitches and extra text boxes that make the video look messy.
• We need to improve our video quality when exporting it to ensure the audience get the best experience.
• Add in quicker cuts and more dissolve and film cut video transitions to add dimension.
• Use lighting/colour effects to match perfectly to makeup and link all clips and different stages of the video together.

Teacher’s feedback of what to improve:

• Move the model aropund the screen so that she isn’t always in the middle.
• Flip some of the shots hoprizontally.
• Use more video transitions to make cuts seamless.
• Add in close up shots in the car.

My Self Assesment Sheet: