SCREEN CASTIFY FROM MRS COBB TO GIVE FEEDBACK:
POSITIVE FEEDBACK FROM MRS COBB:
- Likes the quick montage and editing to the beat
- Loves the zooming in on car with transitions
- Likes the quick edit before chorus
- Loves the three shot in one – using rule of thirds
- Make the opacity on blue filters higher so that it is more visible
- Loves the montage in little black dress with car park setting
- Loves the blue lighting to keep video engaging
- Lovely editing to the beat, quick pace cuts
- Loves projector effects, could add in more sooner in the video – near beginning
- Loves two shot with split screen
- Really good/effective montage to finish video
CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK FROM MRS COBB:
- Some of the first montage clips in bedroom are slightly off beat – fix
- Even more zooming/difference of shot distance
- Ensure edits are perfectly in time, song can be difficult because lyrics are over the beat at some points instead of in time with
- Explore fish eye lens?
- Add in background effects to the white backgrounds
- Experiment with slow mo?
- Zoom in when model flicks away the camera
- Experiment with borders on shots with multiple of the same video
- Fade into studio shots from projector effect – seems jarring
WHAT WE WILL TAKE ON BOARD:
- We will explore effects on the white background e.g. shadows, coloured lines, neon effects
- We will go through all montages and check timing and editing to the beat
- We will zoom in to the model’s hands when she flicks away the camera
- We will clean up transitions and make all videos link seamlessly