Draft of Front Page

Above is my first copy.

I asked One media student some questions so I know how to improve my magazine from another perspective.. I reviewed there feedback so I can see what is good and what can be improved on my magazine. I see that the background needs something to make the image pop, they said the title is very creative and that should stay, and that more writing and to improve I should use colour with the use of my creativity should be added to add unique attention grabbing product. Below I have set some targets to now work on;

Targets:

• Do something with the background
• Make her name Pop
• Add more writing
• Add something like a stamp or somewhat to give the magazine it’s own thing.