Since our first draft we have edited certain aspects such as some narrative-related elements. We have also refined the editing of certain parts, including changes to contrast and colouring.

Draft 2:

We still need to add certain things to our video.

• More narrative related clips
• Refine editing
• Colour effects and image effects.

Overall:

I am content with our second draft but I am still not personally pleased with our video in its’ current state. I want to add more clips to help progress the narrative as well as to improve certain shots that are not a high enough quality for my liking. In summary, we are close to a final product but there is still more to edit. We will now be collecting feedback for our second draft.