Digipak Draft 2:

After we received feedback for our first draft we went to work implementing the suggested changes. Our second draft is the same for all covers excluding the back cover which we changed due to feedback received from our first draft, being that the names of certain tracks were not conventional. The reason we have not modified the other images is that we did not receive any particular critical feedback in relation to them and we had not ourselves identified any need to modify them.

Front Cover:

Inside Left:

Inside Right:

Back Cover:

Advert Draft 2:

Analysis (Digipak):

I am pleased with our second draft. The only change we have made since the first draft is the back cover, where we have edited the colours used in the image. The trails of colour that exit the circle have also been modified to create a more refined look. We also edited the titles of certain songs to make them appear more conventional to the electronic genre. Furthermore, we added a bar code and text at the bottom left of the back cover, to make it appear more professional.

Analysis (Advert):

I am pleased with the second draft of our advert. We have made very few fundamental changes since the first draft. We have edited the font slightly to attempt to make the album art stand out more. We have reduced the font size on both the yellow and red segments of text as we felt the large size was taking attention away from the main image and the name of the album and artist.