What he did well:

He has laid his questions out very well and made the title look bold and stand out. The fonts and how the text is laid out looks very good.

Targets for development:

What he can do to make it better is start off with a drop capital, after doing that can make the whole stand first in bold to make it stand out.

He could also put some quotes on his photo as well as a caption. He should  manipulate the photo of the model better.

On the answer for question 6 he hasn’t  justify aligned it so I will need to change that.

One more thing he could do is to add in a byline and the photography by section.