In this task I created my second draft for my double page spread. What I had to do was look at the feed back I had been given from my first draft and I then made the improvements. The first improvement I made was adding in the drop capital to give the reader an idea of where to start reading.  I then changed the whole of the stand first into bold. The next suggestion I was give was to manipulate the photo of my model which I now think looks better than before. On the answer of question six it was not justify aligned. The final thing I added was the photography by in the bottom left of the image.