I read through my draft for my article, by doing this I found many things that I needed to change:

• spelling and punctuation errors
• repetition of words
• parts where it did not flow properly

To improve my article, I think that I need to add the following:

• I need to add more drama into my article to make it more interesting and to hook the audience.
• explain how I interviewed her and where to set the scene
• Add more sentence structures
• Be careful with tenses
• Add more technical music detail