Here is the second draft of our music video, this is where we began to add in our narrative shots. It worked well, and we were happy with how this draft went, but we still feel that we have much more to achieve and grow with.

Self assessment

• I felt that our narrative links well with our performance shoot, I think that they work well together and that it is fluent.
• I think that our narrative idea works well, and that is it clear and easy for the audience to understand and follow.
• I think that our editing so far e.g. shot length etc all work well and is successful.
• Our lip sync worked well and was very in time.

Targets for Improvement

• I think that we can use the skills that we learnt from Lenny to improve our video even more, we can use more techniques to suggest our narrative even more and influence the way that the audience sees it so that it is even more clear.
• By adding more complex levels to our editing I think that we can elaborate and give our video an even deeper meaning which in turn will give the audience a more meaningful response.
• I think that we can colour correct some of our shots for even more impact.

Overall thoughts

Overall I am really happy with the video that me and Paige have produced. I think that we still have many areas that we can focus on in the editing to make our video even better. But at the moment I am really happy with how well we have done. we ar eon track with where we need ot be, and have plenty of time to experiment with editing and colour before completing our final draft for our music video.