When designing my first draft of my double page spread, I have added the main conventions such as the headline, standfirst, drop capital, columns. However for my 2nd draft, I am going to try to include other conventions such as line spacing, line numbers and other conventions such as by-line and others to try to engage my target audience a lot more.

What I like:

• My star image is looking at the text
• The image on the second page fits well and looks neat
• Well laid out

What I need to do:

• Include page numbers
• Add line spacings
• Drag the black box behind the text on the second page down more to make it more neat
• Possibly justify my text left or right
•  Add strike and colour to “Lock The Rock Inside”