I made a draft double page spread, this will allow me to see what I need to improve on for when I come to making the real one.

Here is what I need to improve on for my second draft of my double page spread:

• Centre the quote.
• Move him to the left a bit and make him bigger.
• Get rid of hyphens.
• Add graphics.
• Headline needs to be something about him.
• Metro indie can be small and in the corner at the top.
• Submit article for feedback.