This is my second draft of my contents page, to improve draft one of my contents page I edited each image individually on photoshop, I then made sure the spacing between objects is equal . I added the line in the background to add some depth. I made sure that the page numbers related to each person. I completed the targets that were given to me below.

What’s new:

• Photo shop my images before I create the real thing.
• Consider more layouts.
• Maybe use less fonts.
• Make sure the spacing is equal between images and text etc.
• Maybe incorporate another colour within my contents page.

What’s next:

• Raise contents a little.
• needs a page number.
• play with the photos in photoshop…filters? saturation?
• fill the black space at the bottom – editors welcome?
• watch the sense of the coverlines…come into the industry – does that make sense?
• Metro Indie interviewed – isn’t the magazine called this? And use the Grammy logo for the coverline?
• Metro Indie – listen to them? confused.com.
• no need to repeat Catfish and the Bottlemen twice in the coverline.
• make the star’s names bigger in the captions.