This is my draft for my double page spread, I’ve used one of the photos from my second shoot with Nate on my motorcycle. I when into photoshop and cropped the background out of the image, since this is only a draft I can go back to it in the future and use it to improve upon new work that I do with the reflections that I have written below

Things that need to be improved :

• image quality – although the image was the best there is still a bit of blur to the right side of the image that could have been fixed
• design- overall the double page spread is pretty plain and requires more detail
• text placement
• text size
• font

things that went well :

• the image its self is amazing with the style of clothing and the style of motorbike that fits the genre well
• colors – the colors can make any person instantly tell that this is rock themed
• the draft article I used for the double page spread has a lot of great detail and it sounds like a believable backstory