Here is some Feedback from another student after they watched my music video they highlighted the boxes green on the sections/elements of the music video they though was Good, ok or bad.

Overall the feedback I got was pretty good, more good than anything else, and some constructive criticism.

targets for the final music video

• Add more of a flow to the music video with more cuts on long static cuts
• shorten some shots to make them not last as long
• attempt to sync the lips better to the song
• possibly change the star image slightly