Double page spread creating

Below is a first draft of my double page spread containing my article for my magazine

Likes:

• I like the colour scheme, my colours are flowy and modern, especially the night vision effect on the image of my model.
• The overlapping of the “LIFE IZ PRESHIOUS” wording.
• The font, I think the font for the Album name is enticing and striking.
• I really enjoy how the paragraphs morph around the image, it looks professional and has appeal.
• The overall composition I feel is very flowy. All that needs to be changed is the more intricate details.

Dislikes:

• My paragraphing is off, for my 2nd draft I will ensure it is both grammatically correct and looking polished.
• My image needs to be retaken, the shoulders are cut off on the cut out because I wasn’t further enough back from my model.
• The cut out itself of the image needs to be done again as it is rough and there is white spots.
• I need to incorporate more fonts as well as more font cover in order for the text to exceedingly pop out against the gradient background.
• The cut out needs adjusting in that the green doesn’t match the green of my background I need to rethink my editing.