Draft three of all all three

FC3:

What’s new, front page edition for draft 3:

• I included a red boarder, this is as I felt all of the features of my magazine were just floating in open space. I needed some sort of constrictions. I want a cohesive colour through each the front page, contents page and double page spread and I chose red. Currently the pages do not work well with each other and I need to do some heavy rethinking.
• I moved the oval ad which says use #FDTOPCHARTS on Instagram. This is because over on the left it felt cluttered and covered some of my cover image.
• Some of my cover lines covered the image too much. this being somewhat unconventional I had a play with how far the creep in to the middle of the image.
• I overlapped the 2 of 2 million as well as upsizing it. This was to complement my earlier uses of overlapping of the $ of CHAIN$ and the rising up through the charts of FD ON THE SCENE.
• I cut out the image of my cover model, however the non cut out looked better so I kept that. But having a play could have produced a better version so I’m glad I did that.

CP3:

What’s new, contents page edition for draft 3:

• Entire colour scheme alteration in order for my contents page 3rd draft to be innkeeping with the style of the other pages in that it incorporates red somewhere.
• I cut out the image again because it had some imperfections
• I used drop shadow for the “CONTENTS” wording to give an increasingly expert and polished feel to my updated draft 3 contents page.
• I included the page number for FD’s article because if I hadn’t the reader would of been clueless as to who FD was and why he was on both the front cover and contents page.
• I had a play with the page numbering to make it stand out from the block black text.

DPS3:

What’s new, double page spread edition for draft 3:

• I altered H20Slicky’s quote on the left. This is because I felt while reflecting on draft 2, I thought I could take this personal article to a further extent with a ‘real’ quote of his about his kind of manifestation to success.
• I changed the colouring of all wording on the left. This was to ensure again, that the reader wasn’t taken to a completely different style of page each time they turned over and that my magazine had a level of coherency.
• I brought the heading on the left hand page down so my layout would seem less blocky and more flowy.

 

My teacher’s screencastify for all draft 3:

My instructions FP3:

• £ sign for price.
• CHAN$ masthead to be taller.
• Boxing in cover lines wording to fit in box + play around with sizing.
• Different font for cover lines.

My instructions for CP3:

• Font under main cover line used too much.
• More colour.
• Page numbers bigger.
• Be careful with alignment.

My instructions for DPS3:

• Move quote.
• Add a quote.
• Make “H2O SLICKY’S” bigger
• Article writing give space to edge of page.