Digipack Draft 2:

This is the second draft of our digipack, including the spines…

Teachers Screencastify:

This is our teacher’s screencasting that has given us some verbal feedback. He has suggested we edit the photographs’ colourings and backgrounds. So the backgrounds are plain and the lightings all match each other. He also suggested we change the title and subtitle, to something more conventional. He also suggested that we change the position of the light (coming from the lighthouse). This is so that the light shines upon the outside rim of the CD.

Targets for improvements:

We watched the screencasting as a group and decided what we want to change/ edit together.

• We will look at other options for the title and subtitles. In particular, we might change the main title to a sans-serif font so it fits our genre. Or we might add some hearts to the “o” or “I” to match one of our original ideas.
• We really want to edit the photos, used in the filmstrips. We want to do some simple colour correcting so that each image has a similar tone and lighting. We also want to erase or select and mask our stars from the backgrounds. This will make the images look cleaner, without any distracting objects in the backgrounds. This will make our digipack covers look more professional.
• We will plan out where our CD will be going by placing a circle in the middle of the 3rd-panel frame. This will helps us whilst editing. Specifically, so we can line the top and bottom lines of the light rays with the outlines of the CD.
• We also want to look into adding a different background to our front and back covers. We think it might look too plain and could cause our genre to be confused with pop.