This is the third draft of all parts of my pop music magazine.

In my front cover I have made the cover title smaller and made the masthead for my music magazine bigger so that it stands out more in comparison.

In my contents page I have made my magazine title bolder and have repositioned my coverline titles.

In my double page spread I have changed the colour of the first page and made my pug and quote text bigger.

 

This is my Screen Castify feedback from my third drafts.

My targets for my front cover from this feedback is to move my coverlines around and add another to fill the space, change the colours of some text, as well as make my masthead even bigger. For my contents page I must correct any punctuation and typos, and change the size and placement of my masthead. Finally for my double page spread I will add in another quote to fill the white space, move my article continued on the next page, and make my article title stand out more.