Music Video Draft 4
- Get rid of the boarders – Not meant to be there
- Sound effects odd if there isn’t more
- Likes dissolves transitions
- Not the twirl transition – looks cliché
- Likes cutting mid sentence
- Likes neon flash transition
- Likes the mirror effect – Do it somewhere else?
- Some nature shots in black and white and some in colour need continuity
- Make ghoshting bigger front 1min 30 ish
- Weird nature shot of grass 1 min 30 ish
- 1 min 40 ish create a similar ghosting on same vid but for other side
- 2 min sunset get frame dissolved as too sharp
- 2 min cut to scale in shot after she lifts her head up
- Nature needs to be dissolved in and out so they arn’t harsh
- 2 min 30 weird transition CHANGE
- 2 min 32 slow down the nature as it can dissolve in n out
- 2 min 47 not sure of shot as naturalistic moment
- 2 min 50 doesn’t like black and white clips
- 3 min 10 ghost her both sides
- 3 min 15 change nature shot from sky to something specific
- 3 min 20 ish fade harsh boarder on frame
- Likes flowers in eye at the end
- Make the eye clip longer and play with it more
- Really look at transitions and speed
- Last clip – should stay with her not the other clip.
https://youtu.be/PNhaHAzatIc
Above are some peer assessed comments.
Our targets were to go back and try to remove the black boarder around some of the clips and we were told that our transitions as well as effects suited the genre well and made for an exciting video.