This is the second draft of my contents page, I have made a lot of changes and added lots of new things since my first draft. I have changed the following so far:

• The spacing between the lines of text
• I added in a pale yellow background
• I added in small pink stars
• I changed the alignment of the text so it matches and is consistent
• I added captions for the imagery
• I added additional photos into star shapes
• I added in some pink lines as I did on the front cover to keep it consistent

Here is a voice recording of a conversation with a peer where she analysed and thought about my contents page and my front cover also.

The targets I have from her are:

• Maybe add in something to the background to keep it interesting and busy and it will make the fonts stand out more.
• Add captions or context into the photos
• Add more capitals into your captions to keep it consistent and interesting
• Link the imagery to the specific article
• Give a border around the imagery to make it stand out