December
19
Feedback & Reflection on Draft DPS
I got some feedback from my teachers and peers on the things that I could change and need to improve on.
- Space out columns of writing as too close
- Get rid of hyphens
- Change the blue font as it could be hard to read
- Bigger page numbers
- Justifying text could make it look neater
- Check line spacing is equal
- Maybe add a logo on the guitar to personalize
- Zoom in the image in slightly to make her bigger
I have taken all of these suggestions into consideration and will make changes accordingly.