Here we performed our music video idea to Miss in order to gather some feedback about our narrative and overall ideas and give us an idea of what we still need to think about and change.

positives 

• LED lighting scenes will be effective
• our model already knows the lyrics which is a advantage
• our narrative some what follows the lyrics of the song making it an amplified music video and may make it easier to follow

targets to consider 

• make sure we plan properly as our narrative and performance are merged together and they do need to be told apart from each other to be effective
• make sure we use a variety of angles when filming especially in studio filming so that It is not boring
• have the model looking into the camera for interaction but also away from the camera to give different depths of eye contact
• make sure our narrative is completely clear and we understand how we are going to show the mother within the narrative

This task was definitely useful as it made it clear to us what we still need to work on and ensure that our narrative actually makes sense and is properly planned out.