Above is some feedback on our second social media page draft. This feedback helped us see what is good and what can be improved to make the page even better for our final draft. This gives an insight to what our audience want to see on our social media page by getting another opinion.

These are two of the recent posts that we added to our stars social media page, announcing a collaboration with Motel Rocks and also the release of the album BlueLight.

What is good :

• good interaction with the audience
• good snipet/sneekpeak video of new music video
• good use of synergy and promotional work used with the collabaration of the beats headphones
• good use of bts shots, makes the audience intriuged
• shows her ordinary side of her out with her friends
• good use of the spotify wrapped
• good use of using music magazine to make her look extra ordinary
• good use of merch

What needs improving :

• Name the other star in the second post
• Where can you buy the tickets from for the tour??
• could create a competition to allow fans to win tickets to xmas party
• no guerilla marketing