This is my first draft of my contents page, I used indesign and photoshop to cut and design the layout of it. Overall, I’m happy how it has turned out and I think it looks conventional to the pop genre but I have asked a peer to assess my contents page to see what I should improve or change to get the higher marks.

From this feedback I my own opinion, I have made 5 targets for me to complete for when I do my second draft.

• Do the editors note
• Change the 2nd image to the person I used in my 2nd shoot
• Change the pink font to stand out more
• Make the headlines more music magazine
• Add higher page numbers