Here is my 2nd draft, I started from scratch as I wasn’t keen on my 1st draft and pretty much changed the whole cover.

Whats new?

• New image from my retake
• Changed the fonts
• Added new cover lines
• Made the background colour pink instead of grey to match my DPS
• Changed the colour of ’11’ in my masthead
• Added my main cover stars name
• Changed the colour and brightened the outfit
• Brightened my models eyes

Whats next?

• Get rid of the border or see if it looks better
• Put something else in the blue box
• Add another cover line in the top right
• Play around with the cover lines trying a different font on some as it looks very blocky
• Fix her hair in photoshop
• Remover the pink bead as it looks weird