Below are all 3 of my designs for my magazine in their 3rd draft. I have also embedded my teachers feedback below.
![](https://blogs.grammar.sch.gg/aimeestrobl/files/2023/01/My-magazine-front-cover-draft-3.jpg)
![](https://blogs.grammar.sch.gg/aimeestrobl/files/2023/01/Contents-Page-Draft-32.jpg)
![](https://blogs.grammar.sch.gg/aimeestrobl/files/2023/01/Dps-3st-Draft-1024x724.jpg)
In summary here are the improvements my teacher recommended:
Front Cover
- Move the main cover line with the name of my main cover star to bottom left
- Make sure the “Win!” cover line in inline with the others
- Make “Izzy” bigger
Contents PageĀ
- Change the font on the categories to the bold modern one
- Go through spelling
- Move “Izzy spills all” down so it’s not on her face
Double Page Spread
- Move the article on the right page to the right to avoid the fold
- Tryout making the “Q” gold
Now that I have received my feedback I will be making these final changes and adjustments to complete my first ever magazine.