Below are all 3 of my designs for my magazine in their 3rd draft. I have also embedded my teachers feedback below.
In summary here are the improvements my teacher recommended:
Front Cover
- Move the main cover line with the name of my main cover star to bottom left
- Make sure the “Win!” cover line in inline with the others
- Make “Izzy” bigger
Contents PageĀ
- Change the font on the categories to the bold modern one
- Go through spelling
- Move “Izzy spills all” down so it’s not on her face
Double Page Spread
- Move the article on the right page to the right to avoid the fold
- Tryout making the “Q” gold
Now that I have received my feedback I will be making these final changes and adjustments to complete my first ever magazine.