Our teacher gave us feedback on our social media page to give us some pointers and ideas to make it better e.g. making it more appealing to the audience. The screencastify can be seen below:

Our teachers feedback

• Jazz the photos up – a bit dull
• More info on introducing posts
• More obvious merchandise link
• Picture of band member used elsewhere
• Tease front cover of album
• TLC with aesthetic of posts
• Guerilla marketing campaign
• Tour dates
• Synergy
• Performing
• Tour dates and tickets
• Cross media convergence

Targets for next draft

• Jazzing up photos
• Build up to album release
• Tour dates and tickets
• Guerilla marketing campaign
• More info in introducing posts