Below is my first draft of my double page spread. After recieving feedback on this I will be able to improve it so that my target audience accepts it as a music magazine of the Indie genre.
Targets
- Higher page numbers
- Paragraphs
- Another quote in article
- Quotes in italics/different font
- ‘Avaliable’ typo
- Make photo bigger
- ‘Doing it my way’ at the bottom?
- Standfirst – bolder
- Caption insert
- Change font of headline
- Consider folds and staples and rearrange