Here is our draft 2 for our digipak. We have now completed all four pages of the digipak which makes it easier to see the digipak as a whole and have more of a vision. There are definitely still elements of this that we don’t like and need to change although are happy with the overall ideas. The middle two pages are very basic currently as we rushed to get them done in order to get a draft up and get feedback from our teacher.

Summary of feedback – 

The feedback we received was very useful to see another opinion on our second draft. Miss gave us very useful tips on how to improve such as ensuring the star image on the front cover doesn’t blend into the background by brightening the clothing to make it stand out. it was also suggested that we change our album name from Firelight to one of the songs we already have on our album such as ‘BlueLight or ‘LivingHell’ as both of these titles could also be abbreviated to BL or LH. We definitely also need to work on the middle to pages to make them fit in with the colour scheme more and ensure we have all of the necessary conventions.

Things we like:

• we like the design concept on the front page
• the different coloured numbers for the tracks on the back are very effective
• we have used a range of images from different shoots throughout the digipak which looks appealing

Things to improve:

• im not sure about the background on the front cover as it seems too much and takes away from the main image, it also discolours the star image
• the middle pages are very basic and don’t match the theme of the two other pages
• we need to add the conventions such as copyright on the back cover as well as the album name and artist