Here is Draft 2 of our digipack which we recieved lots of feedback from our teacher of any improvements and ajustments we could potencially make.

Here is a summary of the feedback:

Front Cover

• The rings are good however we should incoorporate them throughout
• The text on the TV doesn’t stand out perhaps try a light purple or white colour
• The sparkles are good

Inside Pages

• The clouds are nice
• Consider graphic cohension
• Add in the definiton of euphoria

Back cover

• Copyright info needs to be correct.
• Pull rings throughout.
• Nice attention to detail with the nails.
• Add in record label logo and check conventions.
• Look at the curving of the font at the bottom of the disco ball as the ball then curves the other way.
• Possibly change the colour of the song numbers to blue to tie in the colour on the panes.
• See what it looks like with no capital letters to be consistent with the song tittle.
• Add in some sparkles on letters on the track list.
• See if we can weave in the font we have used on the inside

From this feedback we can reflect and look back when creating our draft 3 design taking some on board to overall improve our design. For example, we shall add some rings on the back cover as suggested to create some graphic cohesion througout and morever we will also add some more clouds to the inside pages to again create more graphic cohension giving the digipack a complete look. It is also vital we fix the copyright as this is a key technical conventions of a digipack.