Above is my 1st draft of my front cover. It isn’t quite finished yet as it’s missing the cover lines.
The masthead is conventionally placed, very big and the pop of colour that is colour matched to the two piece outfit of my main cover star in the two ‘1’ that make up the l in Eleven. It’s big enough to stand out and make an impression and also fits the pop genre which conventionally as a modern typeface.
The model is staring at the camera and is large enough to make a presence on the cover and is satisfactorily framed using the rule of thirds. Her expression looks approachable and a little flirty with the smile.
Desktop publishing, Indesign, has been used well to layout the text and images so that they integrate. The pug is different from how a conventional pug would be displayed but it’s well designed. The layout is poor with the cover lines on the left and are randomly sized which looks messy.
A purple, blue, black, grey and white colour palette communicates a fun and girly visual that represents the pop genre in more of an older and a little more sophisticated way in compared to young teen pop magazines. But is done so without losing it’s fun and exciting feel that a pop magazine conventionally has – colour pallet used to good effect and impact.
The font is modern but is hard to read especially the cover lines when put in a different colour, the font is messy and the cover lines feels out of place and is something I will defiantly change.
The costume is very pop very sparkly and not very ordinary which creates a star image. The make up is again sparkly with little gems and the eyeshadow matches the outfit nicely also the body language and posture represents her as glamorous and fun which mirrors the genre brilliantly.
In terms of the language used in the cover lines, it’s okay. For the agony aunt section, I included a quote of a problem on the front, ‘My best-friend kissed my boyfriend’, to attract and entice my target audience knowing this is something that will entertain them. Also ‘Exclusive’ and ‘Secrets’ will attract the audience as it creates a feeling of superiority as it will make them feel included and have knowledge that no one else will know.
The magazine is recognisable as a magazine as it has all the conventional features like a masthead, issue, main cover star, barcode and cover lines along with a pug to entice the reader to read on but it is evidently not finished.
Photoshop has been used to cut out the cover star to place on a graduated background so that she becomes the focus but the inserts are not particularly well framed and feel badly composed. The cut out around the hair is poor and overall looks averagely done. They also lack variety as include the main cover star.
The garde I would give myself if I were to send this off now would be a D Grade, it obviously not done and feels very empty and incomplete. Here are 6 things I will want to improve when I go onto to do my 2nd draft:
- Change the font and typeface of the cover lines
- Make sure the issue date and plug match in size
- Add more cover lines and enticing language- include superlatives and imperatives
- Try play around with photoshop with the image to fix the hair
- Make the two piece outfit brighter and fix the skin discolouration
- Add more icons like the heart around to have consistency and to keep up with the fun girly vibe