2nd Draft of Double Page Spread:
What’s new and what’s changed?
- I added the title and article to my double-page spread. This was critical to add to my magazine. It gives the audience information about my chosen star.
- I also added more captions to my photos, this helps the audience understand what the photos are, and the relevance they have to my article/ magazine.
- Significantly, I also narrowed down the photos I wanted on page 8 to 1. This makes the 1 particular image stand out. I decided to do this, in order to follow the feedback I was given
What’s next?
- I am going to make the texts align left- especially the title. I will do this because I think it’ll look better. I might also make the title bigger.
- I will try moving the text on page 7 and making the two smaller images bigger. This is so that I fully use the spaces. I could also move them down a bit (to fill the gap).
- I also really want to make the only image on page 8 bigger. I needs to stand out against the article.
- I may also add something to the end of the article, where there’s a blank space.