Reflection

This is our draft 4 which I am really pleased with and this is the first draft we have had which is now complete with footage and doesn’t have any gaps. Now that we have all of the footage there are just minor adjustments which need to be made before our final draft. Being able to watch the video through with no gaps now makes it much easier to adjust clips and move things around so that the order makes sense.

What is good: 

• we now have a complete full draft
• the storyline makes more sense now as we reordered it
• we have a range of close up and extreme close ups throughout

Things to improve :

• ensure all clips used are shaky
• make sure all lip sync is perfectly timed
• add some extra FX to make some scenes more exciting

This is some further feedback that we got from our teacher about what we can improve for our final draft.