In addition to our feedback from both specsavers and our teacher we have produced a draft three We have taken in the initial issues and problems with our draft 2 in order to improve our music video.
As you can tell from our draft 3 some things we have started including are:
- Adding contrast lighting in some clips
- Editing to the beat
- Using effects in places that may seem a bit boring at first glance
- Cutting down long clips
- Being initiative with effects and video cuts
Screen castify:
As part of our new feedback on our draft 3 our teacher has produced a screen castify over the top of our video. This will be one of the last pieces of feedback we will be given, therefore it is important we use it to our advantage and edit our video using the following pieces of advice:
- Cut to a close up as soon as he starts singing
- Try and include more close ups of the instruments
- Include more close ups of the singing including a reshoot of close-ups
- correct sequencing of animals
- correct the guitar palying
- recreate fingers moving to add more context
- cut into action
- add quicker cuts as the music video prgresses
- correct repeating shots
- re-frame the animals cheering
- fix the 180 rule