I have recently included:

• Another picture that I took
• Page number
• Contents

Below is my new improved DPS:

I have:

• Made the main image bigger
• Key words stand out
• Made everything stand out more
• A page number

Here is some feedback from a peer:

In this audio I have asked a peer some questions about my contents page, these are the questions that I asked:

• How does the contents page work in tandem with the front cover?
• Is the font/typeface consistent with the front cover?
• What genre of music is the contents page featuring?
• Describe the images of the stars using adjectives.
• Which cover-lines tempt the audience to read on and which ones stand out and why?
• How do the cover-lines reflect a music magazine? If they don’t,  which ones need to be adapted?
• What aspects do you consider conventional or unconventional (page numbers, inserts, captions, catchy cover lines, editors comment?

In my opinion, after listening to my peers feedback, I think I could make the Masthead stand out a little more.