This 30 second clip is our first draft of our music video.  We were still getting used to all the tools in Premiere pro and our performer hadn’t done much filming before so was a bit shy compared to our new and improved clips where our performers were a lot more confident and also new the lyrics to the song ‘These Days’ a lot better.  The costume on our second clips are a lot better and brighter which suits our theme and genre of summer vibes.

To improve we need to:

• Improve transitions
• Edit clips better
• Film more clips
• Sort out more costumes (To create more interest for the audience)
• More close up shots
• Different locations, something grungy
• MES

For MES we need to improve on:

• Costume (more costumes)
• Camera angles (variety of shots)
• Hand gestures and movements to keep the video active